Week 4 progress report
Intermediate (P3 to P4) | Weeks 1 to 4
Overall score
Starting assessment
50/100
Overall gain in 4 weeks
+24 points
Week 4 progress check
74/100
Scores count first attempts only. Corrections after feedback are recorded separately.
Strengths
Clearly sets out the cause, events and outcome of a story, and accurately spots metaphors and personification.
Most improved
Character feelings: went from answering "very happy" to quoting what the character does and says to show how their feelings change.
Needs work
When explaining a description, often stops at "it's vivid" without saying what it shows about the character or scene.
Next steps
Next, focus on what descriptions do: find the descriptive sentence first, then explain what it brings out.
Skill by skill
StartGain
Understanding the text
- Setting out cause, events and outcome70 → 88 (+18)
- Summing up a paragraph's main idea55 → 80 (+25)
- Explaining how a character's feelings change40 → 72 (+32)
- Describing a character from what they say and do45 → 70 (+25)
Writing techniques
- Spotting metaphors and personification60 → 85 (+25)
- Telling description from narration50 → 68 (+18)
- Explaining what a description does30 → 55 (+25)
